Absolutely loved this! Peter and Neal are both perfect here: Peter so smug in his chosen role, Neal so cheekily defiant . . . this sort of banter between them is oh-so-familiar, yet it's all in such a different context--a sexy and fun context! And of course, there's El taking charge at the end, which both boys seem completely fine with. :D
Meanwhile, this was a great line: Neal found himself wondering about the hierarchy of law enforcement officers from the perspective of a six-year-old.
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Date: 2014-11-24 02:43 am (UTC)Meanwhile, this was a great line: Neal found himself wondering about the hierarchy of law enforcement officers from the perspective of a six-year-old.
Hee! Thanks for an excellent fill.