This was just so wonderful. It's already been said above, but I really admire how much your kid Neal is in character; how you show just small, subtle traces of the Neal we know and love... I't amazing. I don't usually like kid!fics, but yours are one of the few exceptions. Thank you for sharing this story with us!
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Date: 2012-11-09 09:29 pm (UTC)I don't usually like kid!fics, but yours are one of the few exceptions. Thank you for sharing this story with us!