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http://miri-thompson.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] miri-thompson.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] doctor_fangeek 2014-11-24 02:43 am (UTC)

Absolutely loved this! Peter and Neal are both perfect here: Peter so smug in his chosen role, Neal so cheekily defiant . . . this sort of banter between them is oh-so-familiar, yet it's all in such a different context--a sexy and fun context! And of course, there's El taking charge at the end, which both boys seem completely fine with. :D

Meanwhile, this was a great line: Neal found himself wondering about the hierarchy of law enforcement officers from the perspective of a six-year-old.

Hee! Thanks for an excellent fill.

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