http://caseyf123.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] caseyf123.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] doctor_fangeek 2014-06-09 01:38 pm (UTC)

Nice job. Great way to show Neal's guilt over what happened to Kate and his need to punish himself. I just love when the "threat of El" is used to get Neal to comply. The pancakes were a nice touch.
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