Love this - I was intrigued by your story idea when you framed it out to me, and the reality of it is so much richer. It's a fun tale, in part, a little sad, in part, and overall, it highlights the awesome friendship between Neal and Moz and what they's been through together, and just WHY their friendship is what it is.

And the end - Neal has learned just what Moz tried NOT to teach him...how appropriate

Thank you for writing and sharing and being part of the exchange.